Tuesday, December 23, 2008

Some old poetry.

As I lay in my couch to get my long vanished sleep,
My heart thinks of her.....thoughts so deep.
The morning sun tries to awaken me but I could do
nothing but cry,
Why do some give us those splendid moments and
turn around to lie?

Love is a tough taskmaster and gives us heart breaks
thru ones whom we loved and cared,
The ones with whom we dreamt that our bliss and distress will
forever be shared.

Days have passed since my heart loved her last,
Whilst I try to forget that painful past,
Knowing well that wud happen when death ferries her mast.

Well I know too much attempt at rhyming-whyming but then that's what poetry is when you were 19 :-)

27 comments:

Sindhu :) said...

Hey.. that was a sad one, but very nice!

Great - at 19 you were writing all this!

Ruth said...

Hearts break hard at 19, or younger. Sweet writing, makes me remember how it felt to be young (oh so long ago).

Merry Christmas, Nautankey.

Curious said...

Now that's a poetry that ppl like me understand... Cute :)

Sindhu :) said...

BTW.. why is it tagged under 'non-sensical'?? :-?

vimmuuu said...

Awwwwwwww...you were fine at 19! what happened to you now ;)

Smita said...

Without beating around the bush, this was a poem?? :D

Am sorry for being insensitive :D cute one for a 19 year old.

Tarun Goel said...

So painful :D, I hope you are fyn now :)

rauf said...

wah wah Tankey !
ice creams and chocolates are always there for you. Don't worry !

at 19 that must be about your first motor bike ?

Prasad said...

ada ada ada!! wat a peeling wat a peelings!!! kalakare machi!

Nautankey said...

sindhu,
yup yup pinjuliye muthinadhu :P

Nautankey said...

Ruth,
Merry christmas to you too. And at 19 it was really hard,suicide sounds like a sweet thing to do :) to

Nautankey said...

curious,
Nandri nandri :)

Sindhu,
That much of emotions n peelings looks nonsensical now :P

Nautankey said...

Vimmuuu,
Well sometimes sanity comes late in life :P

Nautankey said...

Smita,
Hee hee...that's why i mentioned in the post title that this is a poem :) knew many won't be able to find my intentiones.

Thank god i mentioned it was written when I was 19,can escape from criticism saying I am better now :P

Bedazzled said...

"death ferries her mast"!!! .. hee hee ..what were u doing thinking of death at 19???.. nice one ..

Nautankey said...

Tarun,
:) after more than 8 years I got to feel better :P

Nautankey said...

Rauf,
motorcylce @ 19? my dad was a poor man,i did not own a cycle,leave alone a motor cycle. Love is alss a pretty costly affair u see :)

Nautankey said...

Mr.Sharma,
Dank u dank u

Smita said...

Please prove that you are better now :D

Nautankey said...

Smita,
Ahemmm...Looks like ur not gonna rest until u prove I am worse now :P

verbivorehere said...

hey Bluffmaster so theres another one you are a genius at...;

know that will happen when death ferries her mast - so beautiful..

loved it Nautankey.
.hope your show went well.

Prasad said...

smita um sure n'key is way better now wit all the "Experiences" :DDDDDDDDD

Smita said...

@ Nauts

You mean to say my fear was correct, ur poems would be worst than this piece???

*Looks up*
I hope the other readers here are ready for the onslaught ;)


@Prasad

I hope so :D

Nautankey said...

verby chechi,
Thanks a lot :)..show was a blockbuster hit !!

Nautankey said...

smita,
What u have seen is just a tip of the iceberg..some more are gonna come :)...onsluaght is an understatement :P

Pras sharma,
Cool down * 3 :)

myheadtrip said...

I thought you would be writing about your show,...and here you are reminiscing young lost love!!! :)

Nautankey said...

Abar,
Well those who mattered in the blog world of mine know about the show and how it was :)..so lemme do something else.